A day in my life:
Usual days in my life (during the week of course) are always pretty much the same. I have many times before expressed how repetitive they are, but I guess I'll have to say it one more time.
A typical day in my life would start when I wake up to go to school. I reach out towards the piercing sound of my phone's alarm, desperately tapping the darkness of my surrounding to silence it. After I find enough inner force to open my eyes, I see the light of my screen; it glows like a white sun that I must resist with my eyes half open. After this horrible struggle, I finally swipe the screen and the room goes silent. I then have to make a decision: do I snooze my alarm and get some more few minutes of sleep? Or do I wake up now and get ready to go to school? Depending on the hour, I make a decision. Eventually the latter is the one I must take, and then I proceed to stand up, walk to the bathroom and salute my face with a splash of water to help me get out of my drooping state. I get my uniform and then go outside to have breakfast.
After a few minutes my "viaje" arrives. Depending on the day they can arrive at around 7:15 AM or 6:55 AM. As you might imagine, I'm not very good at working against the clock, so I wrap my breakfast in aluminum foil, which is usually an egg-with-ham-and-cheese sandwich and off I go. I get to school and my day continues normally.
After school, again, depending on the day of the week I might arrive relatively early (around 3:05 PM) or a bit late, which is usually when I am the one who has to leave the others in their houses. When this happens I get home at around 3:30 PM. I out on more comfortable clothes, wash my hands and have lunch with the rest of the inhabitants of my house. After this comes the most interesting part of the day, because it is both the easiest and the hardest thing that I need to do in the day: Do I procrastinate and do my homework when I get back from practice? Or do I do it now? Depending on the amount of homework I might go one way or the other. At 6:30 PM I leave to get to my afternoon activities, from which I get back at 8:00 PM and sometimes 9:00 PM.
After being back from my classes, I give myself a nice, refreshing and relaxing bath to wash away both the sweat and the soreness of my practice. I then eat my dinner, which I usually ask for before I return to my house from my practices. While I eat dinner I sometimes do homework, and after this I wash my teeth, maybe browse the internet a bit, and then I go to sleep, only to begin the same cycle the next day.
Valente- Your post is super descriptive and entertaining for your reader, but I think it could use a little something more. You mention that your days are like cycles and maybe that is the message that you could go with? Something about how the days are all the same, but then address what you feel gives you a purpose. Overall, great work. I'm excited to see more from you. Thanks for sharing! :)
ResponderEliminarVery descriptive.
ResponderEliminargood transitions
you could add description about your day in school